Comments for the new belfry

Comment on on toast by personame

personame — Thu, 24 Jul 2008 21:31:49 +0000

I wait to read about the rest of that breakfast. its short and accurate and I like this.

Comment on pub chat by richard

richard — Tue, 17 Jun 2008 17:01:44 +0000

There is.

Comment on pub chat by Veronica

Veronica — Tue, 17 Jun 2008 01:04:51 +0000

Any chance part 2 is in the works for this?

Comment on lochside by richard

richard — Sat, 26 Apr 2008 12:05:38 +0000

Thanks - I’m trying to balance what’s said and unsaid with the snippets on this blog. The unsaid and unwritten interest me more and more. What this means to me and what it means to the readers will never be quite the same, and it shouldn’t be. It lets the reader make it theirs, in part.

Shit, that sounded pretty fucking pretentious. Apologies

I’m glad you liked it though.

Comment on lochside by Veronica

Veronica — Thu, 24 Apr 2008 23:14:53 +0000

“I can do even better
I know…
I know you know.”

That dialogue is the heartbeat. Familiar, but not comfortable, but not haunting.

This is a different place.
Well done.

Comment on morning wine. by Veronica

Veronica — Sat, 01 Mar 2008 17:08:54 +0000

Wow.
“It was like sitting inside a cataract”
The imagery is amazing. I was actually grimacing, completely disgusted by the smells and site.
And then the last line. She speaks. And they are people inside the haze. Real people. Lonely people. I am truly, truly,
blown away.

Comment on collioure i by Sumedh

Sumedh — Tue, 15 Jan 2008 18:53:09 +0000

provoking.

Comment on the jumper by chiyapike

chiyapike — Mon, 17 Dec 2007 16:46:35 +0000

Good description I think

Comment on About by chiyapike

chiyapike — Mon, 17 Dec 2007 16:45:01 +0000

Hmm that’s a good idea. With mine I made a seperate page for all my stories and things, but have them all organized and not just writing freely whenever I want. I like your idea

Comment on chill air by richard

richard — Sat, 17 Nov 2007 11:24:38 +0000

Don’t know where it came from… but it felt right.